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©2008-2009 ~Bilaljackie
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hi everybody please please please give me comments on my work and please tell me how can i improve my work!!! :)
thankyou!!!

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Great job! My only suggestion would be think about making his right leg stand out more...maybe by thickening the line on the outside edge...it might help make that leg pop and not bled in with the cape so much. Just a suggestion...I still think it looks great as is but if I had to make a suggestion that's what it would be. I think it looks great! Good job!!
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I agree with the last comment about the leg. I would maybe make his foot stick out from under the cape to show that it's back there but most of it's covered up. Otherwise he just looks like he has no lower leg. Other than that it is an awesome pic. Great job;)

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